Marriage is the most auspicious ceremony by which two persons tie their bonds and promise to live with each other until deaths. Although, certain people opine that it is prominent to spend grand amount of money on this occasions, others are against it. This essay will discuss both the views in details and provide evidence as to why this money should not be wasted on such occasions.
Some individuals believe that it is essential to spend money lavishly on wedding ceremony of their children in order to make it memorable. They want their wards as well as the people attending the ceremony to remember and appreciate it throughout their life. In Punjabi big-fat weddings, for instance, many ceremonies like mehndi ceremony, haldi ceremony, lady sangeet, et cetera, are performed few days before marriage and a lot of people are invited to pay their visit and enjoy along with the bride or groom. And in order to make the guests feel respected and loved, variety of food and gifts are offered to them by the parents. Thus, parents tend to spend money on these functions.
On the other hand, another bunch of individuals consider this action to be non-essential as these are merely wastage of money. No one recall or admire anything once it is over. Also, there are folks who take the help of loans from bank in order to carry out the requirements. For example, it cannot be ignored that a lot of people nowadays commit suicide after not being able to pay back the amount issued by the banks for these auspicious ceremonies. That is why; money should not be spend foolishly without considering its negative impacts for the future.
In conclusion, this essay argued why certain people are in favor of spending money on marriages while others are not. However, in my opinion, marriage should be done in simple ways and the money saved from it should be given to children as a wedding gift.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76524390244 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43575810256 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6123764881 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220527532308 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716810209364 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568691553884 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134975589534 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388678579491 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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