Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
To what extend do you agree?
It is commonly believed that people should spend their spare time for personal development and relaxation, which are equally important in each and every individual’s life. I personally believe that free time should be utilized in improving skillset and awareness rather than waste it in seating idle on sofa. But, if someone do any kind of physical work, then he or she should rest to avoid stress. In this essay, we will discuss how doing different activities help people in enhancing their overall knowledge, and help them to recover from hectic office life.
First of all, we all are aware that it is important to enhance our professional or interpersonal skills by doing different activities, such as reading books. Because of less knowledge and technical expertise which required to do office duty, we face many difficulties at work. To resolve these, we should learn something in our free time. Software engineers, for instance, have to study hard in their leisure time to upgrade themselves due to technology advancement.
Some people, on the other hand, who do physical work, already know that they need proper rest to relax in their free time. If they do no rest properly then it will become hard for them to do the office activities entire day. Utilizing spare time in different activities, such as watching movies while lying on sofa, help our body to relax and make us happy. Workers, for example, who are employed in factories, have to stand full day and lift heavy.
To sum up, it is equally important to rest and increase skills, because resting help us to live a peaceful life, and broad knowledge provide us good career opportunities further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...n seating idle on sofa. But, if someone do any kind of physical work, then he or s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98571428571 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70240822306 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0154855094 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252704602608 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840920242684 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380975683798 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141226063382 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437813881361 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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