Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, eg football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports e.g tennis and swimming. Discuss both the views give your opinion.

Sports has gained a lot of interest among children's and young adults in last few decades. Also, schools are now focusing on a lot of sports activities. Playing any particular sports has lot of benefits on overall health and mental status of an individual.

There are so many games that can be played individually or in team, both has their pros and cons. Games like Football, Rugby, Basketball, Cricket, etc. is played in teams. The benefit of playing in a team is team work, co-ordination between the players and communication among team members. This all things are important in building up the leadership qualities, that could be useful in one's future growth. Managing a team is a Hugh task that could help a lot to grow. However, individual sports also has its own benefits.

Individual sports like Badminton, Swimming, Tennis, Skating, etc. requires lot of skills, as a single player plays it, he/she should be able to do it single handedly. The important point in solo games is that, single player is solely a winner or loser. The limelight is all on a single player. As its an individual game, the player is focused completely and independently on self development, which helps in growing outrageously in that particular sport, where as in a team, all players are assigned with different task according to their skills.

In conclusion, both type of sports has its own importance, lastly it depends on a person's skill and how a player can contribute to a particular game.

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Average: 7.2 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90079365079 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81687619699 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.813202658 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165294072698 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725130004718 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767772552588 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101812329345 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356712836912 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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