Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is claimed that team games such as football, basketball are beneficial to players , meanwhile , others believe that sports are played individually have superior advantages . From my perspective, both type of sports are beneficial .
On the one hand, it seems undeniable that compared to an individual sport, a group sport require a collaboration between participants, players should work as a team to share the responsibilities, taking into account opportunities, chooses others, so the qualities as cooperation and coordination are of the essence to achieve a maximum synergy. For instance, sometimes a player has a leader position during half of the game and then drop out to ensure the victory to another teammate. Or another example, football player can scarify the opportunity to score a goal to pass the ball to his team player, if the chance of goal being is higher for his teammate.
On the other hand, solo sports also bring a number of benefits allow to cultivate and maximalize the personal capacity . To be precise, being alone without any assistance of others, this challenges his own limits. For instance, a tennis player should strategize the ball serves, predict where the ball falls, to be agile in his moment, he should be multi-task all time. Additionally, when being playing individually,a person is liberated from constant the regulation acts with others, a player should not agree his action with other participant, thereby, having freedom a player can experient with other form of playing.Therefore, these have more choises of satisfaction.
In conclusion, each type of sports have own merits to shape personal development. It depend on each player as to what type of sports they should do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21376811594 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10275389354 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5322932164 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130386994197 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603012159544 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492612442227 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986290699934 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546017149913 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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