It is often argued by some that one should share friendship with those having same kind of mindset, others argue that people having different thinking proves to be better friends. I believe, its easy to find people who will agree in things one has to say, however, friendship is about being honest to each other, so having friend who differ for a right reasons and shows the right direction, definitely makes good friends.
People sharing same kind of thoughts easily ends up being friends. One can talk about a lot of things like favorite movie, actor, food, outfits and so on when they share same kind of interest. It gets easy to communicate with like minded people, as they have many things in common to talk about. Apart from that, it cuts down the time to half when friends with similar choice goes to shopping rather that friends with different tastes. However, such friends are not honest all the time, if a difference in opinion occurs, one would not be honest, due to the thought of loosing their friendship and rather agree with their friend even if the decision is incorrect.
On the other hand, friends who shares different thought process can also make friendship work. Even though there would be a lot of arguments and conflicts among them, people can make their friendship to work out by having mutual understandings. For instance, if a person is doing something wrong, their friend will not hesitate to direct that person onto the right path, as what matters the most is to guide your friend and help them when they are lost. So a friend who differs is a true friend, who can guide you in your lost times.
In conclusion, it is good to have friends sharing same interest, as one can share a lot of things with each other due to common interest, however i Strongly believe, that one should always have a friend with different mind set, so that during your bad times or when you are wrong, that one friend can help you and guide you onto the right path.
- Many large supermarkets are being built today while the number of small shops is decreasing Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 73
- Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults Why is this Is it positive negative development Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 72
- Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults Why is this Is it positive negative development Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64204545455 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23952307081 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485795454545 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7504912453 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312648635138 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126044657621 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571858291852 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208313041858 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044028886128 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64204545455 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23952307081 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485795454545 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7504912453 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312648635138 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126044657621 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571858291852 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208313041858 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044028886128 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.