Making friends has always been the way to socialize and build communities since the beginning of time. Some prefer to have friends who share their same views and opinions and others hold a belief that it is important to have differences. This article will tackle both opinions.
Some find it easier and more comfortable to have friends who share their exact opinions on matters of life. This for them makes communicating easier and less likely to be frustrating or cause conflictions due to disagreements. Having the same views creates and environment of understanding that would help keep these friendships longer and healthier.
On the other hand, others see that it is important to engage in friendships where you have opposing opinions. These differences in views and thinking provides one with a range of ways and approaches to look at life and be open to understanding and accepting other people’s differences without judging. As a result, such friendships could in-turn enrich one’s way of looking at the world.
In my opinion, I believe that it is of immense importance that we make friends who are not a mirror of ourselves. Our differences are what makes us great and unique. You spend a great deal of time with your friends, either at school or at work. Having a friend that you can have a conversation with knowing that they will shed light on things you have not thought of before, is a beautiful way to grow mentally and even gain more experience in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd build communities since the beginning of time. Some prefer to have friends who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86111111111 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80894925073 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2448957532 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298092712199 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943063926824 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754761885327 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17786771651 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459215113248 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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