Parenting is one of the most important and the most difficult thing to do. Teaching parenting during the school life of the students is considered important by some, however others differ to it. Being a parent myself i agree to the importance of knowledge, however i support the latter one. I will elaborate my points below.
The most important part in a couple's life is how to become a good parent. But such crucial role cannot be achieved from books in school, it really needs to be fulfilled by experiences. for example, a book on parenting may help to get you an idea, but every child has their own psychology and no one can relate one's child behaviour with the other. Implementing things you read in a book onto your child would be wrong and would make your child a sufferer.
Another thing is every children has different ability to pick up things and do stuffs. For example, some infants learn to use potty seat at age of 6 months, while others will not use untill their first birthday. So by comparing other kids with yours, and making them do things like others do, will eventually make your kid uncomfortable and unhappy. This small things are very important for all the parents to know, and this can be achieved by experience from parents, friends and family.
There are few things regarding parenting that can be learnt at young age, like you can help your siblings in studying and doing other things that they face problem with, being a good sibling will also help them to become a good parent too.
In Conclusion, at young age things like helping others and skills like that can be useful to raise a child, but more of the other important skills needs to be learned by the experience of others and oneself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, while, another thing, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62662337662 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40081321959 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0626094825 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326029186846 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114989947878 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069568154504 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194639150969 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617917959123 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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