Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?
No one can buy happiness with money but some people believe that money is the most important in human life and they think money can buy everything which is necessary to live easily.
On the one hand, money can buy the luxuries of life for every individual. Rich people ear more and more money to fulfill the needs of their families and try their best to buy each and every comfort with money. For example, wealthy people spend excessive money on the wedding of their daughters and provide to expensive dresses, jewelry or cars but they can never purchase the pleasure for her. These things can giv...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tting good news from family members are some of the way of enjoying happiness. Happiness ca...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...e rain provides pleasure to the farmer. there are lots of examples which causes happi...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vide the inner soul peace satisfaction
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83439490446 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39965986744 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506369426752 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6124363682 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314821894635 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106053702941 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772185465105 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203056355676 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977370185302 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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