Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Other’s think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness is hard to define as it varies from people to people. Some people opine that teenage is the happiest phase of life while others believe that adulthood brings more happiness along with responsibilities. This essay will discuss both the views in details with my opinion at the last.
A bunch of people claim that the teenage is the most cheerful period of life for almost everyone because in this period, the youngsters' mind is free from any kind of stress and tension. The only thing they need to concentrate is on their studies and nothing else. Moreover, this is the only phase when most of the people do not have greater responsibilities unlike adults. For instance, lives of adults are filled with a plethora of responsibilities of managing their personal as well as professional life, due to which they are unable to enjoy their life fullest. Also, teenagers enjoy a sound physical condition as compared to adults and rarely suffer from any disease. That is why, this period of life is considered to be the most joyful.
On other hand, certain people believe that life of an adult is more cheery because this chapter of life offers more freedom in personal as well as professional field as compared to that of teenagers in-spite of greater duties. For example, adults are allowed to take decisions in choosing their life partner, a type of job they want to join, to spend their free time however they want, et cetera. Thus, many people consider this period of life to be more happier than that of teenagers.
In conclusion, everyone needs to accept the fact that life is not always a bowl of cherries. Every teenage will grow up and live a life of an adult, So, one needs to be happy in every phase of his or her life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ople consider this period of life to be more happier than that of teenagers. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65472312704 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.533900487 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0738230526 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287832669691 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101080033414 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752528441126 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186779143694 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846042018107 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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