Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Many people claim that the adolescent years are the most enjoyable periods of their lives because of the lack of responsibilities, whereas some opine that grown-up life endows them with happiness and success. In my opinion, the period when I was a youngster fascinates me because of the relaxing and carefree nature. This essay discusses both views before drawing concrete conclusions.
On the one hand, the joy of achieving the goals we have had since our childhood is irrefutably an amazing feeling. In other words, the adult life gives us the potential to accomplish our dreams. Consequently, people can boost their confidence and feel complacent. To illustrate this, the famous movie star, Jennifer Aninston mentions in one of her interviews that the grown-up period of her life has strengthened her and made her feel proud because of the goals attained in her life. Yet another reason is that it can be a stage in our lives where we can have a family of our own. It can be an enthralling experience which any person wants to cherish in his life. In a recent survey conducted by “The Daily mail” in Australia depicts that an enormous number of people are exhilarated about having a family, despite the responsibilities they will have in the future.
On the other hand, adolescent stage of life can be an enthusiastic period because of the lack of responsibilities. Due to this, they have the liberty to do whatever they want. As a result, they lead a carefree and relaxed lifestyle. In a recent study conducted by the “Weekly Education” magazine shows that the youngsters are stress free as they do not have any commitments. Furthermore, they are in the phase where they can be spontaneous and attend parties at night. As a result, they become amicable and independent at a young age. To elucidate this, the famous songwriter, John Stamos finds his teenage the pivotal part of his life as being social had succoured him in earning many friends who persuaded him to choose the field of music.
In conclusion, each person will have different perspectives about the stage of lives that they find pleasing. From my point of view, I find teenage years the best times of my life because of the carefree and relaxed lifestyle I had.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9138381201 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90322989185 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527415143603 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7859716648 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0526315789 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118576814464 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377021867365 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443108245049 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819783984388 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370452892692 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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