Nowadays, due to the combinational effect of the industrial revolution and advanced technology, Global climate has affected .Some people assert that, to prevent climate change effort of an individuals are essential. while others argue that it's not "a cup of tea" for individual to curb global climate change and they believe that joint effort of governments and big firms can take some relevant step to curb some negative atmospheric situation globally. In my opinion, with government and large industries the effort of individuals to prevent climate change is fruitful.
First of all, some people think that there are several steps that individuals can take to prevent Global climate change. Firstly, if people use recycled products in their daily usage then it is possible to stop environmental pollution. plastic is an unbiodegradable products so it's hard to destroy plastic. Hence, instead of a plastic bags If most people used paper bags than its helpful to prevent pollution upto some extent. Secondly, if people planted more trees to their surrounding area then it is useful to clean the air and directly it can affect environment in positive way.
Others, however, believe that a joint efforts of Government and industries can Curb climate change globally. Big factories are more responsible to spread an air pollution and ultimately it leads to disturbance in climate. The main reason behind this is larger factories release harmful toxic gases into the atmosphere and also some chemical factories remove their toxic water into sea, and this type of behavior lead to climate change. Hence, if proper action is taken by industries then it can be helpful to stop global climate change. Moreover, governments are as responsible as Industries because governments have a right to make legislation to curb climate change. So if governments make trick Rules and regulation for that citizen and also for large industries then it can create a measure positive impact on climate.
In conclusion, after comparing both view points. I think that climate change is the major issues. So, with governments and big firms, if individuals take steps forward to triumph on this issue then we can get fruitful results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23314606742 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77749053418 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4820087461 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360763557344 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120797023028 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920772094128 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218724586855 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648445098197 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.