Climate change and global warming are the two biggest threats to the world now and we can witness an unprecedented hike in the temperature. Few would argue that individuals should start contributing to the environment by taking some measure while few might say that it is in the hands of governments and large businesses only. My two cents are on the earlier part of the argument and I shall discuss my opinion in this essay.
Small things make a big difference at the end. A high percentage of temperature increase is coming from the carbon dioxide levels in the air. This could be avoided by planting a tree in every house and it would not cost much for any individual to do so. While commute, citizens of any nation can use either public transport or carpooling option rather taking out their personal vehicles. The upside of this move, we could further reduce traffic and pollution. Having rainwater harvesting at home is another good idea. Consequently, groundwater can be improved.
On the other hand, both government and large organizations should play a vital role in dealing with concerns raised by climate change. By having deep pockets, they can invest a fortune in scientific researches. As a result, the scientist can come up with new measures, which needs to be implemented. Apart from that, bureaucrats can run awareness campaigns and tightening the laws on deforestation would also help our cause. A large business can adopt the lands and they can improve wildlife. Earth is home for everyone.
To conclude, climate change should be addressed as soon as possible. It is now or never. It is in the hands of every human being. Individuals, governments, scientists and fortunes should work in hand in hand to deal with environmental issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: little might
...nvironment by taking some measure while few might say that it is in the hands of governme...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...essed as soon as possible. It is now or never. It is in the hands of every human bein...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in hand'.
Suggestion: in hand
...ts, scientists and fortunes should work in hand in hand to deal with environmental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, apart from, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93581081081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8491870068 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631756756757 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2888578706 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.05 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235685129189 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548750577753 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054826062009 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12181417487 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722828874508 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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