Zoo life has a wild life. It is irrefutable that, sometime the zoos life are cruel, but it does not mean that it should be closed. Even according to my suggestion, government should take some measure steps and grant some rules regulation regarding zoos protection. Moreover, I will highlight both opinions with example.
At begin with, if i personally talk about people opinion. So, they want that, it should be closed because most of the people beleive that, the zoos life is too much crusal. The faculty of zoo does not provide healthy and safety precautions to animals. Furthermore, most of the animals just like polar bear, an Italian cat are in danger zone.they does not fulfill their basic needs regarding food, health and security. For example, according to Pakistan survey reports 70 percent of zoos are closed because the animals ratio are decreasing day by day due to the cause of diseases.
On the other hand, I beleive that, zoos are the identification of the nation. Most of the School going juveniles or youngsters are love to see animal in very postive manner. In my opinion, zoo are the most protected place to animals but everything or place is required some basic rules and regulation. So, I think government should take some active steps. Open some useful schemes and provide basic funds to establish the zoo sector.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, zoo is a best place to learn many things to animals and everyone should play active part to reform the zoo sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'zoos'' or 'zoo's'?
Suggestion: zoos'; zoo's
...e. It is irrefutable that, sometime the zoos life are cruel, but it does not mean th...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'zoos'' or 'zoo's'?
Suggestion: zoos'; zoo's
...se most of the people beleive that, the zoos life is too much crusal. The faculty of...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... an Italian cat are in danger zone.they does not fulfill their basic needs regarding...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... percent of zoos are closed because the animals ratio are decreasing day by day due to ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...utshell, I pen down saying that, zoo is a best place to learn many things to anim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81153846154 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51055464298 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3598342248 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334515883569 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112724832683 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580571879035 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200158902813 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462419083739 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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