During these decades by expanding urban life in a complicated and competitive economic situation, stress is one of the most prominent challenges for people and majority of them are looking for best solution to overcome stress.
Some psychologists think that job hardships caused to stress directly and they believe that to resist against stress best way is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. In their opinion by this method people can eliminate stress reasons undoubtedly and they can manage their time to do what they want. Psychologists say when people don`t work, they are unfamiliar with numerous problems and it makes them more relax in this life style.
On the other hand most social experts believe that without doing job, people have adequate time to think about variety of problems like financial, social and individual problems and it causes more stress in their life. They think the best method to conflict with stress is increasing people`s consciousness about stress enormous reasons and devise a plan to decrease effects of these reasons. Actually if people know how should manage stress reasons, they can vanish them and be victorious person in this competition certainly. In addition comprehensive researches reveal that most busy people are more powerful in unaccustomed situation to conflict with unforeseen hardships.
In conclusion, nowadays stress has several undeniable reasons and identify exact reason for each case is essential step to overcome stress. After identifying reason I think the best method is looking for a suitable tendency to solve problem or decrease stress influences on life. However spending a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing can conceal stress reasons for a short time, but to eliminate stress totally, first of all we should recognize reasons of that and then must utilize an appropriate attitude to solve it properly.
- since traveling abroad became relatively inexpensive more countries opened their doors for foreign tourists is it a positive or negative trend give your opinion and include relevant examples 87
- Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy since 1980 with projections until 2030. 78
- The tradition that famliy gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts on families and societies? 61
- Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'stress the best'.
Suggestion: stress the best
...and they believe that to resist against stress best way is to spend a portion of the day do...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...erson in this competition certainly. In addition comprehensive researches reveal that mo...
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Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... or decrease stress influences on life. However spending a portion of the day doing abs...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3102310231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74528744675 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9858299591 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234195147413 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951335604373 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737222860213 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147249982566 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641387228382 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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