Some TV programmes, video of violent games and other leisure activities are harmful on children. How harmful they are? What can be done to solve these problems?
Today, everybody has internet in their hands because of the ease in data pack prices. children are especially more found of the web world as for them all their answers are just a click away. But, for passing their leisure time the excessive consumption of online violent games, social media platforms and even some of the TV programmes are kind of putting their mental and physical health at a huge risk.
Toddlers are spending most of their precious hours on games like PUBG, GTA just to name a few. In spite of learning new things they are corrupting their mind as the visuals shown in the games are somewhat controlling their daily life. Youngsters consider the killings in these games to be real and spending lots of money of their parents on buying the stuff available to increase their level.
A study has shown that 9 out of the 10 children playing these harmful games are more likely to be anti-social and possess a great danger of hurting their near and dear ones. In fact, some of the television channels are showing adult content in movies which are spoiling the minds of upcoming teenager as they think that the life shown in that picture is real. Youth are being encouraged to do drug abuse, eve teasing, as the protagonist in the movie does this to make the girl want him more. Moreover, children are becoming underdeveloped, suffering from various health conditions like diabetes, heart attack and asthma at a very young age,
It is a cause of concern among adults as for them their kid is everything and his/her well being is the first priority. So, parents should keep a check on their little ones daily leisure activity. Physical sports like cricket, baseball, basketball, rugby and others should be encouraged by the caretakers so that a child's body can be maintained and it will keep them away from all the health problems. Proper sleep and eating habit should be developed in a child. Even, the Government should ban all the dangerous content whether on gaming or programmes so that a child can't access them easily.
To sum up, a child should be encouraged in proper and healthier activities instead of any harmful leisure activities like gaming and violent content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, as for, even so, in fact, kind of, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78364116095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47554155389 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572559366755 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6350808593 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.866666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213328269091 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681312063771 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589209107954 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126318174706 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588620589265 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.