Someone believes school should put students of different ages into the same class.What is your opinion?
There is an idea to make mixed-age class in school, regardless gender or other considerations. Personally, I think it is the worst suggestion that I have ever known. I will explain my opinions below.
First and foremost, crucial part of human growth is mental health, which is the reason that always in the essential social topics. Causing many inside problems of adults is that they were treated unfairly in their early age. My parents hoped I could join primary school more early so they decided to send me there when I was younger. People around me in the classroom laughed at me all the time just because I was younger that all of them, some of them even forced me to shut up regardless what I said. I was getting better after I transferred to another school to have same aged students. That was my darkest time in my life span.
Another worthy opinion related to this essay is that juveniles in contemporary society are much more sensitive than prior generations. If various ages of pupils are in the same class when teacher using same strategies or methods, it could have a terrible effect. For example, older students do not like treating them as young ones, especially using cute tones or playing immature games, resulting diversity in the class.
Alternatively, It is for youngsters having early social skills, if they have some other age classmates. The concern is that the application is must from pupil themselves and under long-term observation of school and family.
In conclusion, I strongly believe it is the right education method to let students gain knowledge with same age classmates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90145985401 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68018671374 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7685856254 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203720696043 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626384709578 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562844559887 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11504813558 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424236919315 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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