Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things.
What is your opinion?
Space exploration has been open to question due to the monetary concerns involved in it. People disprove space science, as they feel there are direr issues to be addressed, such as poverty, sanitation and they find the idea of spending huge money and venturing into the space preposterous. However, I beg to differ with this view based on two prime reasons.
In the first place, right now we are cherishing many technologies by virtue of rocket science. Take for example, satellite navigation system, which has made positioning any object on Earth effortless. Consequently, we are adept of performing efficacious rescue missions. Furthermore, progressions such as weather forecast and expeditious communication to any part of the world would have been beyond the bounce of possibilities without the furtherance in the realm of space engineering.
Over and above, with the exploding population, relying upon the natural resources in our planet alone, it would be a herculean task to provide for the entire community on Earth. Furthermore, we have already devastated enormous chunk of the bounty in our planet. This is evident by the deforestation and the increased oil depletion, which we witness in the present day. Also, as a consequence of global-warming, Earth may eventually become uninhabitable. Hence, we have to lay our hands on a new home, which cannot be accomplished without knowledge about the interstellar space.
In a nutshell, by exploring the cosmos, we have turned the world into a global village and have made life comfortable. Moreover, we are in a pressing situation to explore an alternate dwelling to sustain humanity. For these reasons, I campaign for probing the outer space.
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| 2018-12-04 | brianarcher | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30882352941 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12540654795 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5180490658 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998029417218 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299134413867 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350829318321 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631976563423 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397610587692 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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