It is true that agriculture is improving day by day but millions of people still have to suffer from hunger and malnutrition. This essay will highlight some primary cause of this and suggest some possible measures for governments and organizations to deal with this problem.
There are various reasons why many people still be hungry in spite of the development of agriculture. Firstly, although several advances have been made during past few decades, food production is still seriously affected by extreme weather such as drought or storms. For example, resident in unstable weather countries always have to face with a number of storms every year. Secondly, in some places, wars and conflicts also make people have to leave their lands and become unemployed and lack of food. Finally, in undeveloped countries, people still go hungry because of failures in financial support to conduct research in farming of governments.
In my view, governments and organizations should work together in order to effectively fight world hunger. They could invest more money to develop warning systems and weather cast so that farmers have enough time to prepare and do necessary actions for their crops. Additionally, new laws and stricter regulations should be introduced in more effective way by governments to deal with conflicts and wars to protect their resident as well as their food. For instance, United nations enacted laws and measures to protect people who in war or conflict zones and support food for them which helped millions of people who in threaten.
In conclusion, despite of the development of agriculture, people still go hungry but with the actions from organizations and governments, it could be reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25818181818 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82106831649 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.154266086 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2297677714 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084779698016 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826640305798 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144959244579 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620110633292 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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