In contemporary society, especially living in the urban area, the amount of products we made cause tremendous noise in our daily basis, from phone ringing, the sound of receiving emails and various of communacation software, becoming unavoidable issuses. The problem existing already, which we would better find solutions to reduce that for the humankind.
Noises means messages and informations are unquestionable useful for the fast-pace world to run. Simultaneously, causing people less concentration, multiple tasks work sounds reasonable and acceptable. Amazingly, numerous bosses called it efficient which is encouraged their employee overtime work naturally. Futhermore, it is hard to exmaine the information people received useless or not, avoiding them is inevitable. For instance, a survey demonstrated information that people received in one day equal a whole life information that people who lived in 17th century can be received. This is the problem that we are facing.
We are able to solve the problem not only people are suffering but also it is about the balance of lifestyle. Firstly, people ought to foused on one job at certain time, refusing writing email with answering the phone. Our ancestor spend long period to learn how to use hands and feet to become a man and woman, there is no way to improve ourself as long as paying concentration on other uncertain tasks. Secondly, keep life simply, less advertisement attraction, less shopping time, even less working time, making us more to enjoy life.
In conclusion, less is more, balanced life is healthy living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95100254151 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7539785089 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128940785017 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043237989538 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513844234156 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673962482449 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565343791985 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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