People from all over the world are tending to migrate to a different country in search of better employment and lifestyle. Once settled, they also make their family members live with them. Though it can be seen as a family reunion, there are positive and negative impacts on their children as well as kin's lives.
Since the inception of globalization, migration to various nations has increased significantly. Some people make this move to find better jobs and others in search of better living conditions. However, once a family decides to move to a new country, children have to leave everything behind to start afresh despite not having any such intentions.
Even though most of them are fascinated by the thought of moving to a new country but there are plenty of children who are teary-eyed by the thoughts of leaving their friends and old school behind. Many of them cannot get rid of the feeling of homesickness and are unable to relate themselves with the new schools and friends, which eventually lead their career to the worst path.
It cannot be denied that a new country opens a door to huge and wonderful opportunities to curious children but there are also times when they become a subject of humiliation because of their race and ethnicity and don’t know how to deal with it. Hence, moving to a new country can be a hard choice at first for youngsters because of their immaturity and language barrier but it gradually becomes easier once they start to become used to the new culture and way of life.
In essence, migration can put a phycological pressure on the children because of factors such as language barrier, different culture, and race; however, it also generates opportunities for better education and career. Several children may not adjust themselves in a foreign country. However, others who do so increase their chances to become successful eventually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...espite not having any such intentions. Even though most of them are fascinated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96855345912 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71605650468 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.764009742 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15378679817 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594317988647 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461216512721 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905031694009 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370110383967 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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