Some countries are using nuclear arsenals these days and has become a serious threat to the world. Nuclear technology is indeed a clean and low cost energy source. Besides the positive outcomes, there are serious negative outcomes for this technology. I believe that negative impact is with nuclear technology and this essay will discuss it in detail.
To begin with, nuclear power is an alternative source for high cost power, but some parties use it for their own benefit. They use it as a propaganda, where they tell the people that the nuclear energy is being used for the generation of power, but they would use it secretly for developing weapons.
Secondly, nuclear energy is often clean to the environment and is a cheap source of energy but some people believe that it is a serious threat to the surroundings. Although some companies have tried to manage their nuclear research plants cautiously, some events have taken place which resulted in the death of many people. For instance, Japan is well known for it’s advanced research in nuclear research and technology. In 2010, a tsunami had hit one of the nuclear power stations and consequently it resulted in a leakage from the plant to the surroundings and resulted in unimaginable consequences.
To conclude, although nuclear energy is clean and low cost energy source, it will be a serious threat to the mankind. Even strict vigilance may not help the sudden outbreaks from the nuclear plants. In my opinion a weapon of such destruction is always a threat to the world and I believe that such weapon can never maintain world peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95555555556 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64845634052 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507407407407 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8695124289 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340293238637 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128326321111 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588871264467 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213390320755 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531629975521 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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