The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

Some countries are using nuclear arsenals these days and has become a serious threat to the world. Nuclear technology is indeed a clean and low cost energy source. Besides the positive outcomes, there are serious negative outcomes for this technology. I believe that negative impact is with nuclear technology and this essay will discuss it in detail.

To begin with, nuclear power is an alternative source for high cost power, but some parties use it for their own benefit. In some countries they use it as a propaganda, where they tell the people that the nuclear energy is being used for the generation of power but the people would never never know what lies behind their plans, as they might be developing some advanced and sophisticated weapons.

Secondly, nuclear energy is often clean to the environment and is a cheap source of energy but some people believe that it is a serious threat to the surroundings. Although some companies have tried to manage their nuclear research plants cautiously, some events have taken place which resulted in the death of many people. For instance, Japan is well known for it’s advanced research in nuclear research and technology. In 2010, a tsunami had hit one of the nuclear power stations and consequently it resulted in a leakage from the plant to the surroundings and resulted in unimaginable consequences.

To conclude, although nuclear energy is clean and low cost energy source, it will be a serious threat to the mankind. Even strict vigilance may not help the sudden outbreaks from the nuclear plants. In my opinion a weapon of such destruction is always a threat to the world and I believe that such weapon can never maintain world peace.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96853146853 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64407111002 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8082284022 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326493571368 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127330736875 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598393986625 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21023211044 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577983940884 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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