The sex of leaders, especially in case of a male in the higher position is considered as a cause of negative outcomes such as violence and conflict to the world based on the history and some people have an opinion that female leaders tend to control a society peacefully. This essay will discuss the reasons why I agree with this statement.
Firstly, females are born as a coordinator and they prefer to solve issues throughout non-violence measures which also can be seen in politics field. There is a proved evidence that women’s brain has a stronger function to corporate with others than men do. This occurs because of instinct that has been taking over between women from ancient since they had to protect their family from unpredictable risks including the attack by animals, the lack of food and natural disaster. Therefore, a country with a lady prime minister or president develop relationships with other countries, and successes in economy as well.
Secondly, sympathy is one of the key benefits to have a female leader. According to the Japanese researchers, women are able to demonstrate sympathy to people regardless their sex, age and looks. This emotion is essential to reduce the unpleased incidents which have been occurring around the world in the last few decades as sympathy can be result in understanding each other and encouraging to prevent violence.
In conclude, the gender of leaders affects the ways of ironing out problems around the world although there are a large amount of male leaders that act in peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'preventing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: preventing
...nderstanding each other and encouraging to prevent violence. In conclude, the gender of...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...nd the world although there are a large amount of male leaders that act in peace.
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ount of male leaders that act in peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03501945525 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72822309566 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0111894825 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183098382733 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649834486976 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620922534425 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110766596722 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566095714115 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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