Dustbins along streets are frequently filled with rubbish, most of which are packages such as bottles, plastic bags and paper boxes. This phenomenon reminds residents that the world is inplete with an increasing quantity of gabage produced by human. Therefore, this essay will discuss about the causes and solutions to this problem.
To begin with, rubbish is mainly generated from packages of commodities. People consume the edible part or keep the usable portion of a product and desert packages for wraping or containing it. The disposed packages become rubbish the individuals engendered every day. Moreover, due to people incline to buy a new device when it is old or broken rather to repair it, the amount of rubbish is expanding. Take Australia for example, Australians produced 7 billion tonnes of rubbish in 2016, exceeding the number of 2015, which was 6 billion.
The solution to this problem is to calssify and recycle gabage. This is generally applied in majority countries, especially in Japan and Australia. Classifing rubbish is the precursor for recycling. After classification, kitchen waste and other unrecyclable rubbish will be transported to landfill for natural decompozation. Meanwhile, recyclable materials, such as paper, glass and metal, will be reused for industrial purposes. As a matter of fact, classify and recycle rubbish significantly reduce the amount of waste and produce profit.
To recapitulate, societies are worried about the growing amount of rubbish generated from package of products consumed daily. An effictive solution to this problem is to classify and recycle rubbish. I deem the environment will be friendly with this approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47509578544 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89490922232 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3613607221 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812317690757 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300578011201 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330046136534 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558123472217 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022450220692 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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