There is a contentious debate surrounding the issue of dramatic rise in the number of students who more opt to immigrate to foreign countries in order to study in higher level. In my point of view, this issue would not only result in studying in proper education system, but it would also contribute to taking advantages of living in sophisticated nations.
On the one hand, nowadays, it is widely prevalent that students of countries in which they don’t benefit satisfactory educational policies or equipment tend to cross the borders. So, this is a precious opportunity for them with regard to acquisition of goals. Although, they may encounter some temporary obstacles, after a while they could readily smooth the ways of achievement of goals. For example, a research conducted by X University revealed interesting results. It is illustrated that 60 percent of their international students could successfully get PhD in their field of study in 2016. Subsequently, they could find appropriate occupation.
On the other hand, these days, people tend to leave their homeland no matter how overwhelming it is in the light of the fact that they live in a country with fair welfare and life facilities. Hence, one of the immediate and viable ways of gaining this aim is studying in the universities or college of those countries. Not only would guarantee that they can be flourished in their beloved subjects, but they are readily able to get citizenship in the future. For instance, according to the recent survey of the X immigration organization, sixty seven percent of overseas students who are studying in the universities throughout this continent have required residency in 2017.
To sum up, it is transparently manifest that leaving the countries regarding in pursuance of their education is definitely reasonable phenomenon. Of course, students may be faced with some sorts of barriers in advance, but they will surely perceive that its advantages worth its downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: sixty-seven
...of the Europe immigration organization, sixty seven percent of overseas students who are st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, of course, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26479750779 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03422633298 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4612305319 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13012673595 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427503160132 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410813131158 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772747761254 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284581128211 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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