Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the past few years, there has been a significant increase in international travel. More and more persons are travelling to places with extreme weather conditions. This essay will analyze the benefits and drawbacks for people visiting such places.
On the one hand, sightseeing difficult areas give people the confidence in their abilities and broaden their horizon. Tourists love to explore the less explored areas of the world like the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. While the journey can be physically and mentally tiring, however the exhilaration one experiences upon its successful completion is beyond description. For example, one Norway explorer Saraus, who stayed in Antarctica for about six months, has described in his testimony one of the most beautiful sunrises ever seen by a human eye. Adventure tourism is on hike these days. People are aware of the risks involved, yet they want to experience the thrill and therefore plan more of such expeditions.
However, arduous journeys are extremely dangerous. People can cost their lives for sake of excitement and fun. For instance, recently a group of seven foreigners lost their lives while trekking on the mountains of Himalayas. It took ten days to trace their bodies. Moreover, government also incurred a huge expenditure on the rescue operation. There are also many other instances when travelers have suffered serious injuries while on expeditions, leaving some of them immobile for the rest of their lives.
The above look illustrates that tours to certain beautiful and extreme places could be adventurous to the people and could also cost lives to some. It is thus recommended that prospective tourists exercise proper precautions and safety measures before engaging in such thrilling yet dreadful excursions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40569395018 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79756048213 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658362989324 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0816397281 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3529411765 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205365250577 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541800010792 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570264926045 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120616631077 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609393510792 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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