In the past decades, its was a social norm to get married at a very younger age, but today in this modern world this has changed. Nowadays, majority of people tend to marry and have children when they are around their thirties. In my opinion, this is a positive development, the reasons for which will be enumerated in this essay.
Firstly, one the main positive development is that, this trend allow people to pursue and work for their dreams. Today, majority of people in our society are ambitious and they are willing to go to any extent to achieve their goals. In the past this was not possible because, most people were committed to family needs at a very younger age. For example, a survey conducted by researchers in 2017 showed that most young people in the past decades had to give up their dreams to tend their families. However, people who has realised this fact, opt to marry and have children later on in their lives.
Moreover, my argument is further bolstered by the fact that, people who marry after the age of thirty can understand the real meaning of family life. In this past this was just a joke for most young people and they often failed to understand the true meaning of life. Due to the lack of maturity their lives were more prone to divorces. But people who finds this maturity finds it more easy to live happily. For instance, according to the findings of Demographic Agency in the United States showed that, divorce rates were lower among people who married in their thirties when compared with younger ones.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that marrying and having children at mature age is a positive development. Because this will enable people to achieve thieir dreams and will also help them to lead a successful and peaceful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71382636656 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35184770825 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2914613841 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313119366874 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109878851606 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393837938756 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192075268447 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765115971176 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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