Usage of plastic is harm to environment. Do you agree or disagree?
Plastic is one of the important material used accross the world. Though it makes human life simple, it has lot of side effects to environment.
Let's see how plastic ruins human life and environment in the below sections.
Plastic material are widely used in shopping malls, groceries shop.
These places have lot of people coming on daily basis. Usage of plastic should be limited in these areas mainly.
Most of the people prefer plastic bags rather than paper bags or jute bags due to which shop keepers tend to use more plastic. These carry bags are not decomposed properly, which leads to the worst pollution in most of the areas.
When the usage of plastic was reviewed all over the world, few countries were found using more than the prescribed usage.
This results helped the government to take strict actions. In recent studies, ocean is found to be polluted more.
Fish and other sea living organism are facing serious illness due to this. Thus, it is high time for all of us to realize and eradicate the use of it.
Plastic are advantageous to humans in one way if it is used appropriately. The microns levels are controlled properly then there will not be any harm to environment. Virgin plastics are used widely in many places which are considered to be safe. Feeding bottle used for kids are made of these.
These virgin plastic may also not be benifited for long run. People should use glass or clay pots insted of using virgin plastics.
To summarize, each individual should realize that plastic is having adverse effect on environment. People should try to carry jute bags with them, by this
way the usage of plastics can be reduced. Shopping malls should use paper bags/jute bags in order to make environment free from plastic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84437086093 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3763232979 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9902082642 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.5 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.31818181818 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164447344554 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529793481348 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465318113582 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693536872248 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400556532613 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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