Excessive use of mobile phones is injurious to a person's life, similar to smoking. In my opinion, there has been a restriction on smoking in some ares and the same should be applied on the usage of mobile phones. However, a complete ban cannot be enforced and certain regulations need to be applied.
In today's time people are more engaged on their phones and completely disconnected from the outside world. Everybody is trying to make their presence on various social networks and being more virtually updated. Especially, the younger generation who seem to be addicted to mobile phones. They find it very difficult to interact with real people.
Like smoking, to put a ban on cellphones is not so easy. It has become a part of our daily lives and people are overly dependent on it. Although, certain institutions like schools, colleges, universities, etc. should ban the use of cellphones in their premises. This will ensure the kids get a break and focus on the real world. Offices should also follow the same and limit the use of cell phones during work hours. This initiative in turn will increase productivity. Public places like gardens, beaches, open grounds, etc. should also follow similar practices, thus, encouraging children and families to spend more time with nature and with each other.
Initially, it will be more difficult as people will be resilient to the idea. However, once they understand the bigger picture, they will comply with the rules. I therefore, agree that the use of mobile phones is harmful to our society and I believe precautionary measures should be undertaken for a bright future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... use of mobile phones is injurious to a persons life, similar to smoking. In my opinion...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... applied on the usage of mobile phones. However a complete ban cannot be enforced and c...
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Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...he use of cellphones in their premises. this will ensure the kids get a break and fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0036900369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67595105384 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.909628597 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3684210526 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335226985561 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913353957888 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878181647431 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195422685453 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905812400333 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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