Why some people buy new phones, desktop or technology (latest devices)
What is good or bad about it.
We are living in a consumer society. People these days buy new gadgets like cell phones, computers, and laptops. People buy these new things due to attractive schemes from suppliers and to follow the latest trends, which can only be seen as a negative thing.
Firstly, people buy new electronic devices as soon as they are launched in the market. They are persuaded by the suppliers that purchasing the latest products will not only make them happy and satisfied but also enhance their status in society. For instance, recently an Apple I phone advertisement showcased a couple who expresses their joy after purchasing the latest series of cell phone and were given wealthy remarks by their colleagues. Therefore, people are encouraged in various forms by suppliers to buy the latest products.
Secondly, human beings purchase new devices to follow the latest trends. Mobile phones and various electronic gadgets have become a fashion accessory for youths, and they buy these products to be in fashion. For example, according to a recent poll, 45% of youths between the age 23-27 purchased new cell phones and headphones only to show their peers that they are after the latest fashion of a high-value brand. As a result, youths buy new devices to follow ongoing fashion.
Finally, people purchasing the latest products is a bad thing as it causes more harm to the environment and human beings. Most of the products have excess packaging to attract customers, which only results in more of non-biodegradable waste; thus, causing pollution. Since every other day, there are new products entering the market, human being's happiness does not last long with the purchased product, which makes them unsatisfied even
after purchasing the new devices.
In conclusion, suppliers attractive advertisements and a fashion to buy the latest devices are a couple of reason people are purchasing new cellphones and various electronic products, which is only degrading the environment by causing pollution and making people unhappy even after purchasing the new products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26586102719 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72774703089 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495468277946 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3328846139 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217488638907 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971883525057 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069371305266 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129560873544 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461906025075 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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