In this globalization era, everything is feasible with the help of media technology and it has reached all the sphere of life.As a result,television is one of the most modern gadget which is highly considered by number of folks but according to the mentality of other people, radio is the significant approach to get the news .This essay will analyze both the aspects in upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples.
To begin with,Silver screen news are more entertaining because television catch our attention and provide the news without any delay .In fact, people never get bore when they watch news on television.In addition , the number of channels are broadcasted on television with sight and sound so people have a choice to watch various kind of news with action and they get to know about the exact situation
Moreover, a magical box has a positive impact for providing an accurate information very deeply to masses.For example ; when we watch any road accident as we can observe the damage and route causes through news without any kind of presence.
Furthermore, the priority is given to radio by some people because it is more convenient than television because it can be carried out place to place due to small size as well as radio programs are so cheaper rather than television. In fact , it is easily used during work time like ; driving and cooking.
To conclude,silver screen has good significance than radio due to innovative features with utmost good visibility and people should strongly committed to give much priority to television as compare to radio for getting a news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87623294707 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.522365139 49.4020404114 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.0 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188899578285 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907625011511 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526837201189 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997014167502 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034751987287 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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