The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?
technology is usually evolving according to different people demands. some individuals believe that younger generations have a conspicuous impact on such enhancements. In my point of view, I wholeheartedly disagree with that and this essay will explore the reasons of my opinion in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
First of all, there is no doubt that most of the young adults or even children are living in an innovative era as well as they are the main users of it. Using such tools might help them to participate in enhancing the current technology. For instance, there are a plenty of channels where can creators demonstrate their notions to the public. This channels might attract many companies to sponsor them. In contrast, there is an obvious competition among applicants. and at the same time, most of the sponsors are merely looking for the quality of products regardless of the applicants ages.
Second of all, it’s irrefutable that there are a plethora of successful old innovators who were working very hard in extremely poor resources to establish a new trend or enhance the current facilities. those people might spend their lifespan in terms of proving their idea to the public. For instance, the founder of Apple company Stive Jobs was working at his own garage and he had a strong belief on his skills. As a result of impressive works, the company has eventually become the number one worldwide in the electrical field and contribute in developing the technology.
To sum up, although younger people might be the most technology users, but that not means they are the merely creators and developers of these technical enhancements. In my opinion the resilience and passion are the key of any success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05172413793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83390588978 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2243773903 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838117249224 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249816869226 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305860051903 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502903655503 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213921399913 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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