In this fast changing world people are driven by their desires to acquire more and more. Hence they are never satisfied with what they have. It is also human nature to easily get bored and aspire for things that appeal to them as new or different. Therefore, in my opinion people are never satisfied with what they have and are in the constant quest for new things. The desire to attain more can be viewed in different perspectives.
The quest to achieve more is a driving force for many professionals. They will always make efforts in their work field in order to acquire rewards and benefits. Such people will always endeavor towards achieving the topmost positions or ranks in their careers. Many people are often bored by monotony, and take to take up challenges and different career path to break the stereotype and do things differently.
Complacence is not good for scientists and researchers, because if he becomes satisfied with what he has achieved, they will never make efforts to do further research or scientific inventions. Many facts on nature will remain unanswered. This will diminish the progress of human society.
However, in personal life, greed for money or materialistic gains can be harmful in many ways. Being influenced by the other people’s wealth and may resort to unlawful means. Sometimes excessive competition can cause people to bring harm to their colleagues. This in turn may ruin healthy work environment. Furthermore, some people tend to equate success with the amount of wealth one possesses. Hence, gaining wealth becomes their prime motive in life.
In conclusion, human beings by nature are never satisfied with what they have. There are both good and bad aspects of this attribute. Sometimes, such quests is good for the progress of Mankind. However, excess of anything is not good. therefore, if there is a lack of control or balance, such dissatisfaction may disturb the peace and calm of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06790123457 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70572532796 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5830188255 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3913043478 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238755061581 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695642987181 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105728509742 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136019543516 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833395468846 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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