One of the most important moments in everybody's life is a moment of makeing a decision. As everybody knows, people have different ideas about everything. Some people prefer to decide alone and some people prefer to use others'opinions. Consequently, each way has some advantages and disadvantages. Using others experiences and being able to think in a reasonable way are the best reasons that can persuade people to choose the second way. In fact, this way has more benefits and less harms.
First of all, each person needs others'experiences. In another word, people need each other in hard situations and one of the hard situations in everybody's life is making a decision for something valuable such as marriage or going to university in another country. people can use others' experiences instead of doing the same thing that they did before. For example, when I was in my home country Iran, I had a hard situation in my life due to find a way to immigrant to another country. I was confused between to ways and I had to make a quick decisions. After a while, I found out that I cannot find the result by thinking by myself, so I started to ask others to help me. Surprisingly, one of my friends had the same situation in his life and he helped me to find my way really quick and accurate.
Second of all, people are getting emotional in their decisions. Therefore, they cannot make a good decision for their problem and one simple problematic issue can destroy them easily. For instance, my cousin started to search for countries to continue his education. After two years effort, he got admitted in one of the best universities in the United States, but he got emotional and he decided to forget his goal due to some fears and some emotional feelings that he had in that period. My uncle found his issue and he tried to help him. My cousin started his education and he is so satisfied with his life right now.
Third, it is nice to be in a community when you have to decide. Making a decision is not easy and everybody knows that, but some people try to make it alone, because they think that they do not want others to be involved in their personal problems.
To sum up, although some people prefer to make a decision by their selves, using others' experiences is a fast root that can help people to make better decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ers experiences and being able to think in a reasonable way are the best reasons that can persuade ...
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Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun harms is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...In fact, this way has more benefits and less harms. First of all, each person nee...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...going to university in another country. people can use others experiences instead of d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60431654676 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68061540003 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470023980815 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.006015688 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9545454545 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103079771553 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325291429464 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374502565748 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750816169985 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388929320606 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.