Stating that the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place, the speaker asserts that even though science and technology are improving in modern society, there will be no impressionable innovation which can play a vital role in strengthening our lives’ qualities. Of course, few would not disagree that our high level living standards are resulted from the innovative developments in science and technology in the past. From my view, however, the concept of the speaker is unconvincing for the following reasons.
To begin, while several developments in science has increased the level of our lives’ quality, in modern days, there are several unsolved problems in our lives, which could be fatal problems to us. When it comes to the innovative improvement in biological technology in our modern society, it is unable to deny that it has provided our lives with effective solutions to heal people who are exposed to lethal diseases. However, it is undeniable that researchers still have important tasks to find medicines to cure people who are exposed to unknown diseases or viruses. For example, in Korea in the last year, the people of Korean was suffered from the virus. Unfortunately they did not have any solution or vaccine to cure the people who were exposed the virus. Nevertheless, the researchers developed a solution in a short period of time because of their continuous efforts to study about a virus, thus the people could be free from the virus. This shows that even though people satisfy their lives’ quality, the importance of improvement of science and technology cannot be ignored.
Further, people tend to need more convenience lives that is resulted from the improvements in science and technology in the past. When it comes to modern people who live with high quality technologies such as effective transportation vehicles or the Internet that made them feel more convenience than in the past, they might still have several needs to upgrade to get more convenience lives. For instance, in the past, when the average of speed of the Internet in Korean was several bytes per a second, people did not satisfied the average of the speed but also demanded a faster service of the Internet. Also, regard to modern society that offers the Internet service with surprisingly a fastest speed, people still need a faster speed in the Internet service. This implies that even people admit that their lives are high quality lives because of the developed technology and science in the past, they still have requirements for the newly progressed technologies.
To sum, despite of the fact that the significant improvements of science and technology have made more convenience lives, both the fact that people have to prepare about the unknown virus or disease in the future and continuous requests for science and technology of people tell us that the living standards will grow up in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 830, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...archers developed a solution in a short period of time because of their continuous efforts to ...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...eral bytes per a second, people did not satisfied the average of the speed but also deman...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... the Internet service with surprisingly a fastest speed, people still need a fast...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260628465804 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.142329020333 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0850277264325 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425138632163 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388170055453 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136783733826 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0314232902033 0.0351676179071 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80923881557 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332717190388 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00184842883549 0.00188951952338 98% => OK
Determiners: 0.097966728281 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147874306839 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0221811460259 0.0139019557991 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2973.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 485.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12989690722 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373195876289 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284536082474 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19175257732 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129896907216 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80923881557 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424742268041 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.6882508745 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 30.3125 20.5533526081 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4344104756 48.84282405 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.8125 120.699889404 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3125 20.5533526081 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 58.7661082474 45.7405998639 128% => OK
Elegance: 1.9173553719 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486706689361 0.300154397459 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.192708421894 0.103427244359 186% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113139086827 0.0752933317313 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.610580032682 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142257489736 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240250764521 0.114077575197 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086022476308 0.0781384742642 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.54707927225 0.336927656856 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0423541537084 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394161219445 0.210909579961 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410621322992 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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