Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people provide a firm opinion about whether being truthful is the key consideration in any relationship or not therefore, it is a subject of intense debate in today's community. As far as I am concerned, I genuinely believe that being loyal and honest is extremely crucial in every relationship. To elaborate more on this specific topic mentioned above, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
The most important conspicuous reason to justify my point of view is that loyalty and truthfulness are the basic foundation of any relationship. What I mean is if we are loyal in our relation with anybody whether it's our parents, life partners or friends, our relationship would run long. This event would help build up trust which would make it harder to break. My life experience set a compelling example of this. Last year, I broke up with my boyfriend simply because he was not loyal and sincere to me. He lied to me a couple of times in the past, and I gave him many chances to correct his mistakes and made him promise me not to lie in the future but somehow I have found out that he was not being truthful to me, despite forgiving him many times. As a result, I have instantly lost full faith in him, and I promptly broke up my meaningful relationship. This example demonstrates how being truthful can encourage lasting of any relation. Graciously according to the recent survey conducted in a local university, it is discovered that the most ordinary reason for the breakup in any noble kind of relationship is due to marked lack of divine faith and not being truthful to each other.
The second reason to substantiate and indicate my standpoint is telling honesty in any relationship is excellent for health, especially emotional health. Put differently, when we are truthful and loyal to anyone, the other person would naturally build a blind faith in us and this event will deliver happiness. For instance, when I was precisely in my freshman year, I was always loyal and faithful to my dear friend, and she was also the same, like me, so we both immensely trust each other and nobody could break our eternal friendship at any reasonable cost. I feel tremendously ecstatic that I undoubtedly have somebody in my life that I can trust blindly. This willingly keeps me emotionally healthy since we voluntarily share our possible problems and precious secrets with one another. This example of myself illustrates how being truthful in a relationship can make somebody feel joyous and gives emotional support and therefore keep it emotionally healthy.
In conclusion, because of the reasons explained above, I strongly believe that truth is the most pivotal part of any relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...al in our relation with anybody whether its our parents, life partners or friends, ...
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Line 7, column 884, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...ful in a relationship can make somebody feel joyous and gives emotional support and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90434782609 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87320174714 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.399200403 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.736842105 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2105263158 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240213633918 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777243917381 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700296370694 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163932772528 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254599467858 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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