With the development of the societies and also with the increase in population around the world, the environmental problems are more significant than before. If we trace the origin of these problems we would realize that the unconscious behavior of people all around the world have caused this issue and actually it is not a simple problem to be solved by individuals. Hence, I do not agree with the statement in the question and from my point of view more strict actions should be done to manage the environmental problems. On the other hand, we should not underestimate our behavior as an individual about this issue which would have positive impact even less on preserving our environment. Following assay will more demonstrate my opinion:
First of all, as all we know, today air pollution is one of the most important problems in our world.
With the increase of the greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and as a consequence accelerating in global warming we are faced with many formidable consequences in our life. This matter is not related to only one country and actually it is such a complex problem that could be solved by only individuals efforts , therefore, all nations and government in the world should work on it to prevent any further terrible happenings. In my opinion, more strict rules should be legislated by international organizations to handle more successfully this problem. For instance, solid and strict rules for factories which consume fossil foul can be practical and only governments have this power to oblige factories to obey issued laws and supervise them regularly. my personal experiment is a compelling example of this: I work for a pharmaceutical manufacturing company. Last year new rules were legislated for all factories which force all manufacturing sites to change the filters every week instead every 15 days which helps to reduce air pollution.
Furthermore, one of the other environmental issues is water resources. today we are faced with water scarcity and again only government can handle this issue too. They should manage the water resources and try to develop more useful and practical methods for water distribution because only they have this power and facilities to manage water resources.
To draw my conclusion, in this developed world, individuals do not oppose adequate power and facilities to handle environmental issues, and in my opinion it is the governments duty to manage such these problems and even it is required to take some internationally decision in this regard. And of course we have not underestimate individual powers and their efforts would have positive impact in this matter even less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, of course, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14252873563 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97649783985 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9871789034 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8125 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1875 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208783272923 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732288025252 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604005619475 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103654051578 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543318819896 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.