Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays, developing in any areas of life is tangible with for people. The people who don't adapt themselves with this phenomena will find life complex day by day. Yong people who are in their growing ages, have plan to improve and get their dreams, so they are more in exposure of complexity of modern life. In my view, the ability to plan and organize is an essential parameter that young people should have it to get a relax life because of two important reasons.
The first reason is that it is essential to have planning ability to organize daily life in order to reach goals and dreams. In the modern life which is changing rapidly we should have the ability to find best route in any case. Today's life is a field of competition which needs wisdom and cleverness to organize decisions. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember that when I finished high school, my goal was to study at university and get major in chemical engineering. There were university entrance exams in my country and a lot of students had competition to get a seat in governmental universities. So, I sketched a plan to study hard based on the books, softwares and etc, which I had opportunity to use them. As a result of this plan I got a good grade and I found the opportunity of studying in a good university. This example demonstrate that we have to have an organized plan to reach our goals.
The second reason is that we need plans to adapt ourselves with new technologies to make our life easier. A lot of works such as banking, studying, … in the modern life are done with developed technologies. We need to know them to have a relax life. For example, I remember that when I started my work as a chemical engineer, there were no requirement about using softwares to find a job. But know a chemical engineer who don't have ability of working with softwares, hardly can find a proper job. So, during recent years I planned a software learning sketch for myself to learn almost one software each year. Therefore, now I easily could find a job because of my software knowledge which comes from my ability to plan and organize.
In some, though some people prefer not think to about future and they don't have any plan for their goals, I strongly believe that in a modern time that we live having good plans is essential to win in competitions and to have relax and easy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...angible with for people. The people who dont adapt themselves with this phenomena wi...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e people who dont adapt themselves with this phenomena will find life complex day by...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ple who are in their growing ages, have plan to improve and get their dreams, so the...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...that young people should have it to get a relax life because of two important reasons. ...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
...g rapidly we should have the ability to find best route in any case. Todays life is a fie...
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Line 2, column 858, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'demonstrates'.
Suggestion: demonstrates
...ying in a good university. This example demonstrate that we have to have an organized plan ...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hnologies. We need to know them to have a relax life. For example, I remember that when...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a job. But know a chemical engineer who dont have ability of working with softwares,...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to sketch'
Suggestion: to sketch
...ent years I planned a software learning sketch for myself to learn almost one software...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...efer not think to about future and they dont have any plan for their goals, I strong...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...tial to win in competitions and to have relax and easy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in any case, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5162037037 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59361648928 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483796296296 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7087437052 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9047619048 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403018155108 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112693231371 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934543260569 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270287088966 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873868615014 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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