Borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that money plays an important role in everyday people's life. In fact, all people around the world bend over backwards in order to make a hoard of money and meet their needs or save it for emergency fund which can be unexpected events. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether in what extend borrow money from other people can disturb relationship. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, giving money from a friend can bring friendship in close. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that it goes without saying that money provide fertile ground for people to achieve their dreams and goals. But in some case, a plethora of people are in a tight budget, which run into a huge problem. Scientifically speaking, people need to be saturated by money in order to overcome obstacles. Perhaps borrowing some money from a friends contributes to solve a problem especially in due time. For example, last year I wanted to buy a new car but I did not, because I did not have enough money. Although I borrowed some money from my close friend, I lost my chance. However, now I earn that money but due the inflation in my country I should pay more than that money that I have been earned. Delving further into the issue reveal that borrowing money not only can handle a problem but also can be useful in emergency situations. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that crowds of people that prefer to borrow some money have been more successful in their professional and personal life because they learn how to be responsible and reliable toward the people that they have received money.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that this action can spread trustworthy and reliability in every society. Broadly speaking, consider you stuck in trouble and some people borrow you a hoard of money. In this case, they not only patronize you in order to solve the problem but also trust you and in fact, widespread trustworthy in the society. To put it in other word, borrowing some money have different aspect and can bring many advantages all around the globe. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, maybe donate some money to other friends caused serious problems. For example, perhaps they need the money for other purpose so this will cause them to tell a lie and finally do not consider the due date in order to pay back the money. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, borrowing money from other people has its own benefits and drawbacks. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that borrow money from a friend and provide an opportunity to escape from various trials and tribulations in life. In addition, people with this action can widespread reliability among each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t that money plays an important role in everyday peoples life. In fact, all people aroun...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
...cles. Perhaps borrowing some money from a friends contributes to solve a problem especial...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...idespread reliability among each other.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223529411765 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.171428571429 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0756302521008 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0571428571429 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0588235294118 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127731092437 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0453781512605 0.0351676179071 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71179022573 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0336134453782 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00336134453782 0.00188951952338 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.0924369747899 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201680672269 0.0209618222197 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134453781513 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3206.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 544.0 408.028673835 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89338235294 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347426470588 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237132352941 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163602941176 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112132352941 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71179022573 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487132352941 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.2591537689 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.76 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1293648637 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.24 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.76 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 45.4732352941 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.38011695906 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194288227357 0.300154397459 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0874463562497 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640438087744 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449235805412 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137589421277 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728748228691 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460108504761 0.0781384742642 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.459193724512 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0555701981298 0.067059652881 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146405763555 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171832207087 0.0618886996521 28% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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