A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
A construction of a plant near a community can have a negative impact such as increased traffic jams and noise pollution. However, it also can benefit people who live there. Personally, I would promote an idea of building a factory in my town. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a construction of a factory could create a lot of employment for locals and benefit them financially. Any large facility needs a myriad of workers to operate it. In this way, not only professionals but also unskilled students might be hired by a factory and work half-time shift. If pupils have a job, they afford things they like. My personal example in a compelling example of this. When I was a high school student, I fiscally dependent form my parents and since they did not give me much cash, I often was not able to purchase commodities that I really wanted. At that time, my hometown did not have a job for students and so, every time when I wanted to buy something, I had to ask money from my parents. If I had had an opportunity to work while a senior, I could have been financially independent.
Secondly, a new plant might stimulate an overall development of my community. Plenty of factories` employees need food, beverages, and fuel for their vehicles. Therefore, new grocery stores and gas stations could be opened. For instance, as my uncle told me when in his small town a company constructed a plant, a lot of people from adjacent cities moved there. His community started expanding and new schools, hospitals, and fire departments were built along with stores, cafes, and theaters. As a result, the life in his town became better since new medical facilities had modern equipment and schools had large stadiums for children to play sports. On the other hand, in my hometown, where an industry is not developed, residents are not satisfied with their lives.
To conclude, I strongly believe that a construction of a factory would be advantageous for my community. This is because it could provide young people with job opportunities, and would help to economically and socially evolve my town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was often
...since they did not give me much cash, I often was not able to purchase commodities that I...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nomically and socially evolve my town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78877005348 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87429175448 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585561497326 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4958917329 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2857142857 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109262956916 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356237455735 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373824034636 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752973241851 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196434391569 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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