Era of twenty-first century is the time of highly talented, highly skilled people and more knowledgeable people. People of today are more aware of pros and cons of society in terms of social, academics and professional study. Hence, parents and family are more understanding and more focused towards the benefits of their young generations. It is comparatively much easier today than that in the past to achieve success with help from one's family. On account of several valuable reasons in support of idea, few are mentioned below.
First and foremost, the understanding between family and the young generation is much compassionate than it was in the past. Today, people believe in developing friendly relations with their kids in order to know and understand their desires, passion and goals. For instance, people spend time with their family by taking them to a family holiday or a trip where they spend time together and develop a good bond of understanding. The corporates even have two days off for every weekend for all their employees. In turn young ones develop trust with their family and share things easily with their family, which is often supportive and provide good guidance. However, people in the past spend much time working as a lobor without machines and this busy schedule made them weiry enough to spend less time to understand family needs and desires.
Second point for consideration is, people today are highly educated and possess knowledge about almost every field. It often helps them in guiding well their young generations. For instance, if a mother is well educated and supposedly is a doctor, she can advise her child well if the child wants to follow the same profession; And, even if being doctor is not the longing desire of child, mother due to her life experience can guide well for some other occupation as well. Unlike, past days when the number of educated were quite less due to which kids often had to face problems in deciding for a good career and could not live a successful and a happy life. Back then in old times parents were not much educated leading to a constrained teaching being offered to their kids.
To sum up the entire supported reasons, I will recapitulate that it is very much easy to achieve success when family is supportive like today and unlike old days. With help from family one can pursue dreams and goals they long for and live a better life in this competing edge of highly talented people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... past to achieve success with help from ones family. On account of several valuable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86460807601 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52948935887 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524940617577 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3130371132 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145114930521 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558721562437 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071442422734 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109416862356 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618652536048 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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