Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that can advertisements tell us about a country? Some people believe that advertisements can play a role of increasing our knowledge of other countries. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
One of the primary cause is that advertisements are a reflection of the country’s culture or customs. These always various from a country to a country, and they are depending on specific features of each country. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. A Japanese advertisement may show a Japanese lady with the traditional kimono, while an American advertisement may show a cowboy with a hat and riding a horse. Through advertisement, we understand that what people from other countries look like, what they do in their spare time, what transportation they use every day, what they eat. Moreover, Advertisements could give us significant information about the economic condition of other countries.
A further subtle point we must consider is that, we can understand a country by its productions. People of various nations usually have different proficiency, and their wares could tell us more information them. I think that there is not a better example of Japanese commodities. When we see Toyota or Sony advertisement on television, we detect that they see the quality as a vital part of their production. In addition, they have exotic enthusiasm for having and producing modern electronic technology. Another instance is about commodities are made by German people. These could show that discipline and high-accuracy play an undeniable role in their lives. They tend to work hard in order to produce wares without any fault. Overall, we should be aware of this point that products of every country could be an indication of its people’s attitude, manner, and spirit.
Apart from points I made above, advertisements enhance our information indirectly. These can stimulate our curiosity for pay more attention to other countries, read about them, and gain deeper understanding of people of these countries. Moreover, even someday we travel to countries that they are our favorite.
All above evidence supports the undeniable fact that advertisement could tell us about other countries. Last but not least, I hope that people avoid of shallow thinking and have the deeper insight about everything.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'apart from', 'even so', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229074889868 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.132158590308 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101321585903 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0286343612335 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0837004405286 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125550660793 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0132158590308 0.0351676179071 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.07121209785 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0132158590308 0.0309702414327 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0991189427313 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0308370044053 0.0209618222197 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176211453744 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2489.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 400.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2225 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3525 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2825 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2075 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1525 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07121209785 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.4880210892 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9382026631 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.56 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.25 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.5045045045 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168228837548 0.300154397459 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0459731504163 0.103427244359 44% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0509317499655 0.0752933317313 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.40795486556 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128363830612 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561989697888 0.114077575197 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434860510062 0.0781384742642 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.25852412395 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0721703409863 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113196854895 0.210909579961 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374197941981 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.