Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
In modern era, Students are study in many subjects in secondary school. I was read some student learn art and music and got better grade in this subject. I agree that students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Because, with aid of art and music students are more understand about our culture, our self and our world.
First of all, World some beautiful and nature thing we can express by art like painting, crafting, decorating and so more. Besides, music also important to express some feeling like emotion, happiness and fear. Art and Music both subject enhance the developing creativity of the students and it is important factor for student future. Lots of people have ability to create new thing when they are learn art and music some student attract to this subject and getting progress in art or music.
Second of all, Student also acquired knowledge about the culture to see in art and traditional music, also learn to musical instrument like piano, guitar, and so on. When students go to museum they seem to the ancestor art, painting and musical instrument so they can easily gain knowledge because they already learn in high school. Furthermore, students are bore by regular subject they wants to relax and entertain to our self. So, students study on art and music in secondary school it is a better way to get rest, make better communication with classmate, working together and entertainment and enjoy the study.
In my opinion, Students should learn music and art subject and it is very essential for student. It is help to students to increase creativity, improve concentration, better relationship with classmate, entertainment and knowledge of culture and traditional.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., decorating and so more. Besides, music also important to express some feeling l...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...ility to create new thing when they are learn art and music some student attract to t...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...udents are bore by regular subject they wants to relax and entertain to our self. So,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.299065420561 0.229887763892 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.133956386293 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0747663551402 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436137071651 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0529595015576 0.0685040099705 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109034267913 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0249221183801 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66088510661 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0404984423676 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0436137071651 0.0887237588012 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01246105919 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00623052959502 0.0139019557991 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1726.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 286.0 408.028673835 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03496503497 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363636363636 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293706293706 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192307692308 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108391608392 0.112833075102 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66088510661 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 49.8704124389 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4285714286 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9163422691 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.7992007992 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.87837837838 1.45489161554 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396016982944 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152307248748 0.103427244359 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0526067891666 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.60624905778 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0824930499516 0.151897553556 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194053981477 0.114077575197 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106913609656 0.0781384742642 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.46235559329 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0270225727911 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291263251779 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607348769416 0.0618886996521 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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