Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
There is no doubt lying is the most hateful and destructive feelings among people's relationships. Some people believe that telling the truth plays an ultimate role in strengthen any relationship whether it is new or old. In another word, nobody respect lyers. In contrary, others disagree. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second postion. I think that it is impossible to find any person who does not lie under any cercumistances. There are several situations in which the person needs to lie. Following is a brief interpretation to my perspective.
First of all, most parent lie to their kids under age ten years old about the fary tale lady that picked up there teeth at the night. Also, about Santa Clause. They are all lies but parent like to do those things to increase the imagination of their kids. However, they still lies.
Second situation is that under the name of safety some people lie to their beloved ones in order to hide a terrible or bad news from them. For example, when the doctor told my mother that my grandmother had an advanced cancer that metastasized from her lungs to her brain and she will die within a month. My mother did not tell my gramma about how her health was critical. She did so to help her enjoy her last few weeks among her family and leave our world peacefully. Do you think my mother dud wrong? I do not think so. These kind of lies is necessary.
Last but not the least, sometimes we can not face people with our real feelings about them. Honestly, we dislike lying to them. But, we can not tell them our real feelings, A good example of this that one of my job obligations at the pharmacy is to hide my personal emotions from any customers and smile and welcome them. I have to be kind and smile to everyone even though that person is mean and treat me bad. I have to respect him/ her and lie about my gladness to meet him/her.
Based on the situations I discussed above, I think we have to differentiate between the white lies and black lies. The first ones which every one does it daily . And the other one is unforgivable and capable to weaken any relationship.
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Essay evaluation report
in strengthen any relationship
in strengthening any relationship
to strengthen any relationship
most parent lie to their kids
most parents lie to their kids
the fary tale lady that picked up there teeth at the night.
the fairy tale lady who picked up their teeth at the night.
but parent like to do those things
but parents like to do those things
they still lies
they are still lies
These kind of lies is necessary.
These kind of lies are necessary.
that person is mean and treat me bad.
that person is mean and treats me badly.
Sentence: In another word, nobody respect lyers.
Error: lyers Suggestion: ?
Sentence: As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second postion.
Error: postion Suggestion: position
Sentence: I think that it is impossible to find any person who does not lie under any cercumistances.
Error: cercumistances Suggestion: circumstances
Sentence: First of all, most parent lie to their kids under age ten years old about the fary tale lady that picked up there teeth at the night.
Error: fary Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: My mother did not tell my gramma about how her health was critical.
Error: gramma Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 389 350
No. of Characters: 1686 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.441 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.334 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.411 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.407 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.63 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.249 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'respects'.
Suggestion: respects
... is new or old. In another word, nobody respect lyers. In contrary, others disagree. As...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tation to my perspective. First of all, most parent lie to their kids under age ...
^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'lie'
Suggestion: lie
...tion of their kids. However, they still lies. Second situation is that under the na...
^^^^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...my mother dud wrong? I do not think so. These kind of lies is necessary. Last but not the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...first ones which every one does it daily . And the other one is unforgivable and c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, however, if, second, so, still, then, for example, i think, kind of, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46907216495 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50537055065 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559278350515 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6701061264 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2222222222 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3703703704 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40740740741 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102574859698 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292555227881 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348458234078 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594099041979 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389426255668 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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