Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe
From a broad perspective, in the current states of affairs we face, in which so complicated become communications among individuals that establishing constructive relationships is an ultimate goal for most of people. Therefore, it is not far-fetched to presume that obbeying() from some principals in their relations palys vital role to that end. However, which factor has more influential impact on the people's relationships is considered as a contentious issue.There is a growing segment of people who contend this iea that veracity is an integral part of each relation. I personally concur with this idea, and in the ensuing paragraph the rational behind this will be further elaborated.
First and foremost, the fundamental of every kinds of human relationships is based on the matter of trust. There is no denying the fact that when a person trust another one, it means that he is virtually sure that they are honest with each other. Indeed, this issue is highly dependent on the kind of connection between individuals. For instance, two close frinds talk frankly regarding the details of their personal life with each other, while this type of speaking is meaningless within two colleagues. Therefore, regardless of the way that people associate with each other determining the extent of the intimitaion emong them, saying the truth is accounted as a major rule requires to be accpeted. That is why no explanation is accepeted for telling the lie in order to justify any mistake or any predicted circumestance.
Another vital point which should be taken into consideration is the possible implications may accur due to ebsence of honesty. Needless to say that as a direct consequences of breaking the trust among people, the relationships get worsen or even ruins. Undoubtedly, having known someone relaible to generate link between them, a person is of the opinion that he will not recieved any dishonest word from his encounter. Consequently, his sense of trust will turns to dissapointement and unrelaibality if he gets aware that other person had told him something wrong. This adverse emotion can last for a long time and its detrimental effect can harm other people uncounsiously. From a larger scales, if this idea has been spread as a communal sense within a plethora of people, the whole of the society cannot rely on each other anymore.
To wrap it up, it is more judicious to say that people should not overlook the prominence of telling the truth in their relationships. Not only do general public create their connections according to the trust among them, but also deminishing this view can bring a variety of disadvantages for the human societis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e relationships is an ultimate goal for most of people. Therefore, it is not far-fetched to pr...
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Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ps is considered as a contentious issue.There is a growing segment of people who cont...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
...nesty. Needless to say that as a direct consequences of breaking the trust among people, the...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
.... Consequently, his sense of trust will turns to dissapointement and unrelaibality if...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...uth in their relationships. Not only do general public create their connections according to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, frankly, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10273972603 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01904275719 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3875680797 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10816339085 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337471681599 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234398240413 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649582439041 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150309413326 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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