Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that making a stronge relationship is not an easy thing, and it needs many points to be in consideration, so people can achieve it. In my openion, telling the truth is the most important consideration. I feel this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, lies are easy to be revealed, and when someone discoveres that his relationship is build according to one, his relationship will be detroyed at the end. For instance, one of my work colleges is a beautiful young lady with a health condition that need special care, but nobody knows about it. Last year, she knew a guy, who was intrested in her, and they met each other couples of time. He Fell in love with her, and was going to ask her to marry him. She was worried that he will not stand her disease, so she decided not to tell him about it. However, one day, he heard one of her family members talk about it by accident, and he was very angry, and their relatonship ended. His anger was not because of her sickness, in fact, it was because she did not tell him by herself, so he believed that she did not trust him.
Second, telling the truth is an evidence that the relation between two people are strong and it can be a forever relationship. For example, if you meet a new person, you do not need to be an open book infront of him because he is new to you and still you cannot rely on him, but if you are with an old friend or a family member, it will be very easy for them to know the truth, and that what happened with me last week. I was in a meeting, and one of the attendees asked me about my openion, which I do not want to reveal it, so I lied. No one knew that, but after the meeting one of my old friends came to me directly and asked me why did you do that? He was the only one who was able to know my exact opinion.
In conclusion, I strongly think that telling the truth is crucial in any relationship not only because it srengths the relation, but also lies cannot stay forever, and one day they are going to be found out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cided not to tell him about it. However, one day, he heard one of her family memb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13432835821 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35540484458 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485074626866 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3473176683 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144625391643 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553762974478 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056204283362 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103123760892 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383192656844 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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