Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Confidence and respect are the basics foundations of any relationship, they are reached when the truth is always said no matter the consequences. Personally, I believe that telling the truth is crucial in our daily lives and relationships. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, we can demonstrate regret when we tell the truth after had told a lie. When the truth is said, even after a lie, we prove that we have nothing to hidden, we are willing to apologize and fix what is wrong. Otherwise, if we did not reveal the fact, the problem will be getting bigger and bigger because another lie needs to be said to continue the first one. For example, when my sister was a child, she did not want to tell my mother that she has got a low grade in a test. She did not tell my mother the truth and apologize for it, in contrast, she hidden two teacher’s letters from my mom until the principal’s school call to her and explain everything. Consequently, my sister was without TV for weeks not because of the poor score but because she lied twice to mom.
Secondly, telling the truth shows the character of a person, their honesty and integrity. This helps to build strong, deep and healthy relations which can be love relationships or just work and business relations. The truth should always be said, apart from birthday surprises or presents, since keeping even little secrets can lead to a breakdown of trust. My own experience demonstrates this concept. Last year, near my birthday I noticed my boyfriend was very odd, avoiding eye contact and stuttering when I ask random questions. As a result, I felt sad because I noticed that he was hiding something of me, however, I decided to wait for my birthday to discover if everything was fine with our relationship and talk about it. Fortunately, as a birthday surprise, I received a puppy from him and I was very relieved with his behavior. It improves my confidence in him because I know he felt uncomfortable when he told me a lie, this tells a lot about his character.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the truth has always to be said and is crucial in every relationship. This is because being honest we prove we feel sorry after had told a lie, and because it is related to a person’s character.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66172839506 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83222254242 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523456790123 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0471694293 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3684210526 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964973204739 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038393213935 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349102507029 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779736583599 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411466212326 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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