Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I often hear people say that they are or are not good at dealing multiple tasks at the same time. On one hand, people who can deal it well would say that it can help them gain more experience. On the other hand, people who cannot handle it well would say that multiple tasking could affect the qualities of working outputs. In my point of view, I believe we can still do them well, since we have more tools to assist us now.
To begin with, it is true that our brains have limited capacity to operate tasks. Once our tasks occupied all of the working capacities in our brains, the qualities of our working outputs may be lower. Take my personal experience as example. I remember when I was a student in high school, I spent considerable amount of time on my dance club. Even when I was in the class, I would imagine all the sequence for dancing. because I had a performance in the end of the semester. As a result, though I had a great performance in my show, I got a lot of F in my final exam, since I put too much attention on my show.
However, with the development of technology, we no longer need to rely completely on our brains. Instead, we can share some of our workloads to computer or smartphone. For example, iPhone. Few years ago, Apple, a leading company of smartphone, released a new function called Siri. Siri is a virtual assistant that can help as handle some works, such as setting reminder or searching on website for us. In that way, I would not lose tracks when I spent too much time on practicing dancing.
Moreover, our brains are also resilience, so the more that we do multiple tasks, the easier that we can handle them well. For instance, I remember when I just started my sales job, I felt the I was overwhelmed by the crazy workloads, since I not only had to develop new clients, but also had to deal with the issues that old clients had. Yet when I spent more time on doing these same tasks, I felt like they were not difficult to me anymore.
In conclusion, though our brains have biologically limits, with the help of technology and practice, I believe people can still handle those tasks well.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... operate tasks. Once our tasks occupied all of the working capacities in our brains, the q...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...d imagine all the sequence for dancing. because I had a performance in the end of the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d imagine all the sequence for dancing. because I had a performance in the end of the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...hen I just started my sales job, I felt the I was overwhelmed by the crazy workloads,...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39898989899 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48382688205 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0255587278 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9523809524 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970470759955 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292009556928 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333150217858 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594026078621 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371609841345 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... operate tasks. Once our tasks occupied all of the working capacities in our brains, the q...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...d imagine all the sequence for dancing. because I had a performance in the end of the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d imagine all the sequence for dancing. because I had a performance in the end of the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...hen I just started my sales job, I felt the I was overwhelmed by the crazy workloads,...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39898989899 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48382688205 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0255587278 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9523809524 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970470759955 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292009556928 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333150217858 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594026078621 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371609841345 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.