Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling is the important activity of relieving stress, enjoying new places, and understanding other nations’ culture and circumstances. Everyone has different way of travelling since their viewpoint is incomparable. Personally, I believe that going to unfamiliar places alone is much better than joining group with a guide. Travelling guide will virtually control our plans, lead us to see only positive matters, and be together with some people throughout the travelling period.
Firstly, individuals must follow the agenda of others, which signifies that they cannot stay in the place that they enjoy for a long time. People enjoy divergent kinds of things in daily activities. However, they are unable to satisfy their need if they should meet requirement of others. To be more specific, someone may want to stay in some area once they visit. Unfortunately, they cannot simply stay for a long run because other members of travelling group are waiting them. Consequently, some individuals might be required to move from places that they enjoy in order to keep up with other members if they travel with others.
Secondly, it is significant to comprehend not only satisfactory things but also negative sides of unfamiliar places when people travel. Nowadays, guides tend to let people see only positive sides of nations or areas because they concern about people’s feelings. However, this is not the whole story since understanding the flip side will help travelers to comprehend matters of the new place. On the other hand, people can see unsatisfactory things of the nation which they visit if they travel without the guide. Therefore, they are available to reflect both good and bad sides of the area.
Finally, individuals must travel with the group during the travelling period, which signifies that they may end up spending time with unfriendly people. We cannot easily choose the travelling partners when we join the group, so we might join the group which contains someone who has negative attitude towards us. Moreover, we should be with them until the travel ends, which is truly unpleasant experience. By contrast, when individuals travel alone, they can be free of any unkind attitude of others. As a result, they will not be exposed to anxiety caused by the negative demeanor of others.
In summation, travelling with the group controlled by the guide can be fine experience for some people. However, it is not the best way to enjoy new places due to some drawbacks. To mention these downsides, we cannot stay in the place that we like for a long time, understand the disadvantage of the nation. Furthermore, we might end up having hard times with someone whom we do not like.
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...times with someone whom we do not like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11963882619 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74015156811 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503386004515 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3995169556 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4583333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135784512359 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467551198829 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400166920847 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916696803173 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381182439089 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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