Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Foreign language is one of the most important things in our life. When stepping out our house’s doors, we will see texts in foreign languages, particularly English, right away. It is very necessary to learn foreign language, especially when we are young because we can learn faster and can practice more when growing up. I will elaborate why people should study second language during the young age throughout the following paragraphs.

First of all, children are good learners. There are many researches claim that kids learn 2 times faster than adults. By the way of example, to recall my childhood experience I could remember 5 words per day when I were 4 years old but when I were 15 I could remember only 1 word. Not only the speed of learning, but also quality and effectiveness children are likely to learn without doubt. They trust the teachers faithfully unlike adult, which always have questions. Actually, children usually have question also but these question are creative ones.

In addition to learning effectiveness, children are young and have more time to practice. As from the famous quote “ Practice makes perfect ”, learning foreign language while you are young will have better skills compare to people the same age but started to learn later or when they are adult. I will explain clearly through this scenario. Average people life span is 80 years. In case people started learning the second language when she or he was 5 years old, so they will have 75 years left to practice. On the other hand, for one who started learning when she or he was 20 years old thus there are only 60 years left to practice with the lower speed than she or he was younger.

From the aforementioned above, it has proven that people should learn foreign language as soon as possible. The younger you are, the more effectiveness of learning. It is also clear that studying from younger age would make learner better skills because of practicing more. Therefore, let’s get started practicing from now !

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e throughout the following paragraphs. First of all, children are good learners...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, by the way, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92128279883 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54942357667 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2643491254 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177263287961 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558432251251 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473262659503 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107760288805 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249633823148 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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